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  • FrankJScott

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  • sigridur

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    I know that you already finished this story, but I gotta say, I love it's ending :) It's a happy kind of sad that for one last time things are like they used to be RIGHT before it all goes to shit again.
    July 28th, 2012 at 04:54pm
  • Queen Obscene

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    Well, he deserves a kick in the balls.
    April 2nd, 2012 at 11:30pm
  • ElegantFalcon

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    Happy, sad, happy. But good all the way through. It's good that they're learning to appreciate each other and just be happy that the other person is happy, even if what they're doing isn't exactly favored.
    March 25th, 2012 at 06:28am
  • which-witch

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    I was totally hoping that Dakota would flip out on him and demand to know why he was out so late, or bring home some random girl. But that's not like the Max in this story.

    Anyways, I liked this chapter, though I wish there had been some other indication of time, like acknowledging the date on her phone or calender or something like that. Do either of them have jobs?When did they graduate high school? How far into the future is it?

    Question question question that's all I'm ever good for. I can't wait to read more!

    Signed, karen's evil twin. Even though I'm the real Karen. Shhhhh.
    March 25th, 2012 at 12:53am
  • AlixTheCreature

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    0.0 Sad/Great Chapter
    March 25th, 2012 at 12:40am
  • ElegantFalcon

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    I'm glad Dakota's mom wasn't pissed at them. And such a nice way to start your day...
    March 21st, 2012 at 05:32am
  • which-witch

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    Me gusta. I'm sorry I didn't have time to read the most current chapters until today; I've been a little busy. But they're good. Isn't she a little young to lose her virginity, though? Just a thought I had while reading. And why haven't Sandra and her mother caught on about their new relationship?
    March 21st, 2012 at 12:32am
  • AlixTheCreature

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    Yay!!!!!!!!! I feel special!! Hehe
    March 20th, 2012 at 05:57pm
  • AlixTheCreature

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    Your Welcome(:
    March 18th, 2012 at 06:31pm
  • which-witch

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    Woot :) I liked those last two chapters. How many more do you plan on adding until you end it? I don't want it to end, but I'm curious because it sounds like it's approaching the end.
    March 14th, 2012 at 10:05pm
  • AlixTheCreature

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    I LOVED IT! <33
    March 14th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • Queen Obscene

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    About damn time, woman.
    March 14th, 2012 at 12:21am
  • ElegantFalcon

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    Nooo! It can't just be a dream
    March 13th, 2012 at 02:46am
  • which-witch

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    So so so I just read this story. I avoided my homework, but this makes me want to read more, so that's a good thing. There are a few grammar and spelling errors, but those can be overlooked for the time being. I would be more than happy to take the time to help you revise it.

    Anyway, I like your story line aaaand I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment. Okay, Karen's public announcement is over.
    March 12th, 2012 at 09:07pm
  • iMusic-Freak

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    I love this! >w<
    Keep it up. Update soon.
    March 12th, 2012 at 07:52pm
  • AlixTheCreature

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    I loved the chapter...I awaited Max's return! That was an Insane dream...-Hunter
    March 12th, 2012 at 07:32pm
  • AlixTheCreature

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    I loved the chapter. It was great! I really can't wait for Max to come back. Ronnie is acting kinda....rude/mean? Both I guess...ANYWAY! Great Chapter
    March 8th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • luvtheguv

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    PLEASE WRITE MORE
    March 8th, 2012 at 03:10am
  • let_it_be.

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    If her mom's boyfriend ends up being abusive, I will flip shit. You don't know how many stories I've read where the boyfriend abuses the daughter and it's really depressing. :(
    March 8th, 2012 at 02:50am
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