"The type of curves all over that drives everybody wild." I love that sentence so much. It's great.
I really like this. I normally don't like this way of writing, because I usually prefer when being shown instead of told what happened, but I like it. It's new and interesting.
I would try another cuss word other than "shit". I realize that it was probably repeated for a reason, but I still think it was overdone.
I really like this. I normally don't like this way of writing, because I usually prefer when being shown instead of told what happened, but I like it. It's new and interesting.
I would try another cuss word other than "shit". I realize that it was probably repeated for a reason, but I still think it was overdone.