March 30th, 2008 at 02:28pm
Crossroads - Comments
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LOL, LOVE IT!March 30th, 2008 at 10:47am
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jackass waiterMarch 30th, 2008 at 04:52am
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Funny stuff!!!!!!March 30th, 2008 at 03:29am
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U guys are mad keep it up!March 29th, 2008 at 11:35pm
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loving the story so far!! :]
cant wait for more!!March 29th, 2008 at 10:28pm -
LOVED ITMarch 29th, 2008 at 01:30am
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cool chapter!So cute!March 29th, 2008 at 12:58am
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COOLMarch 29th, 2008 at 12:57am
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LOVE IT!!!March 27th, 2008 at 05:14am
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thanks we appriciate your commentsMarch 26th, 2008 at 08:32pm
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Really cool guys!March 26th, 2008 at 08:23pm
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LOVE IT!March 25th, 2008 at 02:37am
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This story is turning out good guys keep it up!March 25th, 2008 at 02:18am
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Coolio chapter!March 24th, 2008 at 05:13pm
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Thanks guys and please if the spelling mistakes are in my chapters then its jst from me typing cuz i always type to fast and make mistakesMarch 24th, 2008 at 12:41pm
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OTHER THAN SOME SPELLING ERRORS, IT IS AWESOME SO FARMarch 24th, 2008 at 05:06am
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I really like this story but it could be better with a little more editing. Just little spelling errors. But keep up the good work. Ha I sounded like my teacher!March 24th, 2008 at 02:14am
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im sorry if u got confused we will try and fix this, but thank you for your comment- Modern Myth:
- This is very good, but, it would do a big help if you put a little note in saying who's Point-Of-View it is. I know you did that for the little sidnotes for the Summary chapter, but still, I got kind of confused.
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OK we'll write whos Point of view it isMarch 23rd, 2008 at 11:07pm