Fictional Reality - Comments

thank you for updating, i love it, it set all down for what is to come and i can only guess anyways i can't wait for the next chapters! by the way i really enjoy your writing style :D

pleanty more action to come!!!! 13 should be up soon ^^ thanks for the comment. ^^

this story is so interesting and mysterious :D caaaan't wait to find out what's to come :D

thank you very much :) hopefully 12 and 13 will be up soon, i'm just waiting for them back from my beta :) thanks for the contact :D

oh thank's for the update and well i really liked the last chapter and the kind of cliffhanger at the end...i sense this is getting really interesting :D keep the good work coming :D

sorry i've been on holiday, i HAVE written more and i've got some to post right now :) the rest needs to go to my beta for her to check. sorry for the delay!! xx

update girl please :) what's going to happen with the guys?

UPDATE PLEASE!! What's gonna happen with the guys and Blair?? Please try to update more often please!!! I realy want to keep reading this, i'm hooked with this! Thank you

I've gone back and edited the chapters to try and make it easier to read - do you wanna take a look and see if it's any easier to read?? Thanks again for the pointer! I hadn't really thought about it.

anything that helps! thanks for the concrit! I really appreciate it.

Something that is really holding me back from reading this, is that there is no spaces between paragraphs. The huge wall of text is overwhelming, and I am having a very difficult time reading even 1 chapter without straining my eyes. Maybe if you were to go back in and add the spaces it would be easier to read.