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  • PandaB3ar

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    Valid point haha i wrote it when i was tired and thinking about the younger children in a story i was writing for school
    February 15th, 2012 at 09:32pm
  • Starwood91

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    The story is great!!! I was so into it that I did not see any spelling errors. I had the brother ever tried to stop the abuse and if she killed her mother or so the father say why are there younger children.
    February 15th, 2012 at 04:21am
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