Children of the Night - Comments

Dear author, your status for this story says, it's coming so I won't say you need a summary because you will write one. I like the names you picked for this as well as the first chapter. You made feel the pain the parents felt by giving up their children. I liked the hints of mystery and I can't wait to see how your characters will develop and what you'll put them through. ~Marian.

Dear author, your status for this story says, it's coming so I won't say you need a summary because you will write one. I like the names you picked for this as well as the first chapter. You made feel the pain the parents felt by giving up their children. I liked the hints of mystery and I can't wait to see how your characters will develop and what you'll put them through. ~Marian.

Even though it's only started, I can already see that this story will be interesting. The prologue enticed me and so I've subscribed. I'm interested it see how the kids grow and such. The layout isn't so bad, a little hard to read, but that's only because I'm kind of blind. Lol as far as grammar errors and typos, I saw some, but nothing a quick look over can't do. Keep up the great job!