Sorry I haven't been able to comment before now, I've been busy with coursework, but, wow! I'm really glad you decided just to do things your way, I felt that the ending turned out great, and it was rounded off very well - you didn't leave anything unanswered. This is a truly excellent story, so thank you for taking the time to write it!
It definitely didn't turn out like poop. There's so much I'd like to say about this story, but I feel like I'd just be repeating myself, as I've already wrote a review on it it for the Mibba Magazine - I'm not sure when it'll be up though. Keep writing, this is great! I'm completely hooked.
This story has definitely fell together(: I'm falling in love with it and each chapter that passes I'm in love with it more. This story is greeeeeeeeat and I can't wait for the next update. GREAT JOB. <3
I want Mo and Darcy together! Lol. Everytime I think of Mo I think of her and him. Lol. This chapter was really good, I loved this update. It really shows her grief.