This story is so lovely, and so beautifully written. You really have a way with words! All of the characters have life & Annie and Alex are just the sweetest :) Keep it up, you're doing wonderfully.
I always smile when I see this story has been updated. You portray the characters emotions so vividly as well as accurately and your writing style is flawless. I'm so happy Annie and Alex's story has taken a happy turn. Can't wait to read more! :)
I'm absolutely in awe of this story so far. The way you write is just beautiful, and the use of second person point of view as Annie is talking to Alex just makes it even more unique. It sort of gives the story a personal touch. I was actually really disappointed when I got to the last chapter you have posted, so I'm really hoping you update this soon.
I think what I love most about your writing is the fact that is so poignant. I love the realness, and the little subtleties that you put in to make it more believable. Sometimes, it's like I'm watching a scene play before my eyes. I adore this story, so I hope you keep updating! Thanks for a great read.
Hey I just found your story as it was recommended by another author that I follow - and I am really enjoying your story. I find it like a bedtime story to Alex - being told in real time - without the benefit of hindsight. I think this is very creative and gives a different slant on the whole story. Usually a story teller would know the ending - but Annie doesnt - she is living it!
And I also think it is interesting that you use the title - FIX ME. On first thought, you think it is Annie that is in need of fixing. But now we are finding that Kris is also in need of repair.
I just found this story and I love it so far. I like how you've written it as the point of view of Annie speaking to Alex, because that's different. Please update again soon, I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Annie gets some relief beyond Kris, like meeting with a social worker/counselor/support group. She's had a lot of heavy stuff to deal with.
I am in love with this. Annie's character is so believable and real that I almost want to think she's a real person and you're wrting a play by play of actual events. The emotion in this is incredible, from every angle. I hope you update it soon because I can't wait to read what's next.