Fix You - Comments

  • Retrouvaille

    Retrouvaille (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    This story is so lovely, and so beautifully written. You really have a way with words! All of the characters have life & Annie and Alex are just the sweetest :) Keep it up, you're doing wonderfully.
    June 17th, 2013 at 04:35am
  • Simply Ace

    Simply Ace (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    So I just stumbled over this yesterday and I just wanted to say that I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
    June 11th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • Simply Ace

    Simply Ace (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    So I just stumbled over this yesterday and I just wanted to say that I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
    June 11th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • vices

    vices (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    AW OH MY GOD KRIS NEEDS TO STOP BEING SO SKJDFHLAKJSDHCJLT
    THAT WAS SO PRECIOUS
    June 10th, 2013 at 10:33pm
  • dreamerforever

    dreamerforever (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    Definitely agreeing with Jayess. I'm glad Alex is home and very healthy.
    June 10th, 2013 at 09:45pm
  • Jayess

    Jayess (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    42
    Location:
    United States
    Not true she doesn't need to worry about Alex any more. You never stop worrying, you just find something else to worry about!
    June 10th, 2013 at 02:17pm
  • katiexlee

    katiexlee (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Great update! I'm so happy everything is turning out okay for Alex and Annie. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    June 9th, 2013 at 09:40am
  • Captain-Sassy-Crocs

    Captain-Sassy-Crocs (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Canada
    I always smile when I see this story has been updated. You portray the characters emotions so vividly as well as accurately and your writing style is flawless. I'm so happy Annie and Alex's story has taken a happy turn. Can't wait to read more! :)
    June 9th, 2013 at 05:54am
  • Call The Angels

    Call The Angels (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    82
    Location:
    United States
    I'm absolutely in awe of this story so far. The way you write is just beautiful, and the use of second person point of view as Annie is talking to Alex just makes it even more unique. It sort of gives the story a personal touch. I was actually really disappointed when I got to the last chapter you have posted, so I'm really hoping you update this soon.
    May 20th, 2013 at 04:02am
  • contemplating.you

    contemplating.you (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I do hope you continue this story, I absolutely love it.
    May 9th, 2013 at 09:51am
  • vices

    vices (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    aw it's all because of Kris he's so askdjchlaksjdhflk c:
    April 13th, 2013 at 08:49am
  • Dallas.

    Dallas. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    84
    Location:
    United States
    So glad Annie and Alex finally received some good news!

    Look forward to more!
    April 12th, 2013 at 11:50pm
  • katiexlee

    katiexlee (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Great update! I'm glad Annie and Alex finally got some good news.
    April 12th, 2013 at 11:42pm
  • jaspynlowe

    jaspynlowe (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    I think what I love most about your writing is the fact that is so poignant. I love the realness, and the little subtleties that you put in to make it more believable. Sometimes, it's like I'm watching a scene play before my eyes. I adore this story, so I hope you keep updating! Thanks for a great read.

    -Juliette
    April 12th, 2013 at 11:23pm
  • soupy

    soupy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    Hey I just found your story as it was recommended by another author that I follow - and I am really enjoying your story. I find it like a bedtime story to Alex - being told in real time - without the benefit of hindsight. I think this is very creative and gives a different slant on the whole story. Usually a story teller would know the ending - but Annie doesnt - she is living it!

    And I also think it is interesting that you use the title - FIX ME. On first thought, you think it is Annie that is in need of fixing. But now we are finding that Kris is also in need of repair.

    Well done - I look forward to the next chapter.
    April 11th, 2013 at 05:57am
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    I just found this story and I love it so far. I like how you've written it as the point of view of Annie speaking to Alex, because that's different. Please update again soon, I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Annie gets some relief beyond Kris, like meeting with a social worker/counselor/support group. She's had a lot of heavy stuff to deal with.
    April 7th, 2013 at 09:46am
  • katiexlee

    katiexlee (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    I just read through this story and I love it so far! I hope Annie and Kris are able to help each other. Can't wait for the next update!
    April 7th, 2013 at 12:31am
  • billet-doux

    billet-doux (130)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I am in love with this. Annie's character is so believable and real that I almost want to think she's a real person and you're wrting a play by play of actual events. The emotion in this is incredible, from every angle. I hope you update it soon because I can't wait to read what's next.
    April 6th, 2013 at 09:42pm
  • jazter

    jazter (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    38
    Location:
    United States
    I wasn't expecting the update but it was a welcome surprise. Darn life getting in the way of these things ; )

    A lovely update! I hope she stops throwing up.
    April 6th, 2013 at 08:41pm
  • burn fast glow long.

    burn fast glow long. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    This was literally perfect. I can't wait for the next update! :)
    April 4th, 2013 at 04:37am