I'm about to kill the caps button, sorry Beth. OMFG KILL ME THIS WAS FREAKING AMAZING GIVE ME SOME OF YOUR WRITING SKILLS BRO! UGH I'M IN LOVE <3 That's all. Wait no. Frank you are so funny, you got Bob and Ray going crazy trying to find a girl that you can fuck and you are already getting fucked! HAHAHAHA I CAN'T EVEN! <3 -Jenn.
KILL ME THIS WAS AMAZING I'M DEFINITELY READING ALL YOUR STORIES OK I SWEAR, ALL. YOU'RE AN AMAZING SMUTT AND FLUFF AND MCR FIC IN GENERAL AUTHOR. I love you. I dedicate my last breath to you.
Well from the very beginning. Ray and Bob said that Frank never fucked a girl, well, it sounded like they knew he fucked a guy :D but they were so clueless to what was happening in the staff room :DDD really really clueless :D I liked it, it was all in 3rd person and there was past, present#1 and present#2 blending together and thanks for italics, because otherwise I'd might get lost :D I thought that sexy time was past though at first :D because of the italics too C:
This was really good. I think people use story dividers more for time changes, and I think if you didn't have them people would still understand the difference between the italics and normal text, but they didn't really bother me either. I guess it's just who you ask. Overall I really liked this one-shot. It was really well written, and the style was different than many other stories on here. Good job.