Dying in Wine - Comments

This is really good. I like where it's going. Update soon :)

I love the difference between chapter one and two. in one you go off talking about death and the black limo and then two is about how she is getting married. I that you have updated another chapter after 8 because you left off with her kicking her husband to be in the family jewels.and also her now ex boyfriend does he play a bigger role later on because i know the limo guy does since the limo is mentioned in like every chapter.

Very interesting. The guy sounds like Death. I like it so update soon!