Camisado - Comments

I loved it :-)

omg this is perfect. I love it!

....... Girl you need a beta reader or something, EDIT dangit, you cheddar head.... I refuse to leave a good comment until your english improves at least just a little...

I like how you sort of gave the story a fairy-tale-like feel instead of "zomg hott sexxy teen vampires."

I like it so far. I don't think I have read anything like the way you wright :) please update soon.

"My normality." Ryan...it's not normal. *sigh* Frank adds a good comic relief and I'm glad that Ryan isn't, like, sad all the time. He has some fun. :) This is wonderful.

you did not just put them through workout wednesday.... that is soooo horrible of you, ugh the one where you have to do the chair thing, and the one with the stepper thingies.... ooooh poor Ryan, and Frankie... :(

Okay, so I'm not a ryden reader really, it takes a lot for me to start reading one but honestly, this is wonderful :3 Plus the fact that there's Frank Iero makes me all happy inside :)
I'm actually really, really keen on this and I'm curious as to what comes next.
Also, kudos on being original :)
Keep writing, love :)

Very poetic. I liked it. I have a passion for stories that run like yours dose. If there is no poetry in the words, no abstract take on the world, I can't stomach them. Yours was quite good though. It would be a shame for you to delete it just because it's not famous yet. I had to wait nine chapters before I had any subscribers at all. Keep up the good work, and I'm very sorry about your friend. I hope you find some comfort in writing.

Oh my goodness, the last line of the prologue, I almost cried. No joke. This is so fantastic! Mr. Wenner sounds like a fun dude, too and yay for Frank! I just love it. :)

Hmmmm.... Iz love you anyway, but I don't beleive you were trying to talk about grains in line four of the first chapter when it says barley...

On another topic, I'm committed and the next time Iz seez you you shall be hugged, hard. Girl and you're the one who first called me emo, well now I'm gonna come out and tell ya, get them damn dark thoughts out of that beautiful hair....

Yay for commenters!

And DO NOT delete this story!

I love this, you should update. Soon!
And sorry about your friend

opps... TAKING not taken haha

I'M TAKEN YOUR VIRGINITY!!!
Well comment virginity anyways ;D
Well like I told you already.... It's very
high class and Victorian style (probably
because the King and Queen thing)
This is totally cruel and twisted and
soooooooo blood thirsty!!! Im loving it
so far BUT you gotta write soon again
because I may just faint if I don't get to
see George (RYAN) be SAVED!!! I
wonder how the guys would react to
the thoughts of their very own fanfiction??
Especialy one that sounds so good so far :D
hehehe okay... get to writing woman!!
OH! Also, it's been FOREVER since I've
been on Mibba, thanks for getting me back
uo and running ;D

xo
Anita :)