If You Need a Hand to Hold... - Comments

That was cute! I loved it! Damn I wish there was gonna be more! And although I don't watch Saw, if he was holding my hand, I think I'd probably do it lol. Great job!

That was cute! I loved it! Damn I wish there was gonna be more! And although I don't watch Saw, if he was holding my hand, I think I'd probably do it lol. Great job!

I loved this! i think you should continue it as a full story (:

This was really adorable. I enjoyed it very much!

So damn cute! <333

I have to agree with everyone, this was so sweet and cute :) plus I love that you have written about Johnny because I sure think he needs more notice! But back to the story, I really enjoyed reading this and It's nice to read stories which are written clearly! Good luck :)

I loved it. it was really cute at the end. great job :)

I loved it (: great job!

HOW COULD YOU SAY THIS WASN'T VERY GOOD?! IT WAS BLOODY AMAZING!!! All caps aside, it really was good for you not really writing much Johnny stuff. Simple and sweet like you said, but it got my mind racing like hers. What if this and and what if that? The entire time, I felt like I was her, cringing cause I've seen all of the Saw movies and know what happens, wondering about the mysterious stranger to her side. And when the lights came on and she froze over who it was, I did too. I imagined what it'd bee like for me if I met any of those guys. Drawing blanks, shock and melted piles of goo left on the seat.

I also liked how each seat was numbered. I guess that's how they seat over in NZ? In most theaters I've been to here, its first come, first seated wherever they want. But I loved the concept that you could end up late for a movie, have your seat stolen and end up sitting next to someone who would change your life. And the male-ness of his chuckling at her mini screams. Theres something about reading he chuckled softly that makes me feel so feminine.

Brillant job, luv. Best of luck in the contest <3