Desire to Survive - Comments

I stumbled across this story and I am in love! Hope to see an update soon!

Please update soon I'm a new reader and love this story

I know it's been awhile, but please update?
<3

Thank you guys so much for the positive feedback!
I'll be sure to stay on top of my writing for those who are willing to read<3

Well, considering the other comments were kinda short, I figured I'd give you some lengthier feedback. Because I'm in an analytical mood, I hope you don't mind. :D

Firstly, I love that you chose to do a Walking Dead fic. I absolutely adore that show. It's my favorite. :3

Secondly, I just love your wording throughout this story. It's simple, but powerful at the same time. For example, the line [i"]We all had our own stories, but we were all the same in the end." That line really struck me. It's brilliant. Simple, but powerful and truthful.

I also liked the way you described the characters. You really get a feel for who they are rather than just an empty description. I think the best example of this so far is Oakley and Kaden. You describe them very well and it feels as if one would really know that type of person, which I really enjoyed.

Overall, this story is brilliant. Be expecting me to subscribe. I can't wait to read more!

I adore the Walking Dead. I enjoy this story and stay ungrounded :P

Love it so far!