The End of the Line - Comments

  • ptvjaime

    ptvjaime (1600)

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    Interesting idea.
    Dude, ETF is just a freaking mess right now.
    Not that it'd be ETF if Ronne came back.
    At this point. . . Idek.
    But it's a good idea.
    You should expound upon it. >.>
    February 20th, 2012 at 04:27pm
  • november_rain

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    Whoa o_o that IS a rather revolutionary idea o_o I mean, I know we already talked about it, but still.. It was much clearer written full out like this and I love it O_O

    I loved how docile the familys morning is; there was a really sweet essence about the whole setting, really. I really wanna know whether he'd take that offer o___o it was interesting, how you pieced it together x) and I hope to high heaven the acursed hand dun bring another group to the ground x_X >.> I loved everything about this, I love how you ended it in a way that let's the reader decide - I loved everything.

    LOVED EEEEEET! o_o I iz so proud <.> <3

    Ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

    Molz
    February 20th, 2012 at 05:33am
  • Firstriver

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    Hah that's an interesting idea !
    February 20th, 2012 at 04:36am