Don't Forget About Me. - Comments

Oh my god. That was too perfect. Just. Ah I love it.

Wow ah oh my gosh. I randomly came across this, I think on AllTimeFanfiction, and immediately fell in love. I adore the original story and when Alex chose Jack, I'm pretty sure my heart melted with love. Your writing style is really descriptive, which I like, and I really really enjoyed the story. <3

Ive just read this from start to finish and this is amazing! Its so original and perfect. I literally cried at the end. This is awesome :)

but this was really goodC:

i literally cried at the end aw i wanted him to [pick life and he could try and get the him and other jacks ;ife

Oh sorry, I must not have made it very clear -my bad- Alex and Jack pretty much had the exact same child hood, but their lives vary from the 'decision night' which I gave you flash backs of, Alex chose to remain friends, whereas Jack chose to do something about it, so that's where their paths vary - I hope that makes sense?

I'm in the process of writing the next chapter now actually! I figured I owed it to you, and I hope you like it as well as being surprised :) xo

FINALLY WE FIND OUT WHAT THE LAMP MEANS. Awwww, that's adorable. <3 It's interesting that Alex remembers that though. Does that mean he's going to start remembering more?
Great update dear, can't wait for more. :)

Sorry I haven't replied to any of you! But thank you for your comments, I really appreciate them!
Thanks 'TayDan' I read your comment about two chapters ago, and I've tried my best to tone down the description as much as I can :)

'kernelatrox' thank you for your support! I'll try get the next chapter up asap! xo

I still don't see how this story has so few comments. asl;dfakdsjfha ugh.
ANYWAY. I loved the update. :) I'm really looking forward to your next update whenever you get around to it. :)

Oh my god HOW DOES THIS STORY ONLY HAVE TWO COMMENTS?
I'm in love. Subscribing now. You're a wonderful human being. I need more whenever you can. <3

This is good :)
One thing though: try not to over-describe. Like, I personally don't feel the need to go into detail about what he's wearing and how he puts it on and does his hair. Instead you could pull it into a sentence or two, so it's not droning on.
I do like the plot line and everything, though :)

Whoa, this story is awesome. Hi, it's Chloe from alltimefanfiction creeping on your story ahaha, your description drew me in :')
But yeah, this story is really good and the plotline is so original and it's really well written, yeah, I'm definitely subscribing :3