Pretending - Comments

Yay I'm not the only one who says "silly goose" to people!! I feel slightly less immature now!! :)

Okay so I adore this. Pleaseeee update<3

argh i love this story, i laughed so hard at jimmys speech about "zacky" getting charlotte, 'fuckety duckety' hehehehe. can't wait to hear more :)

Ooh Jimmy! haha and finally Brian knows! UPDATE SOON!

I absolutely love Jimmy's reaction, after all the deepening drama in this chapter. What's gonna happen next with all the congrats Zacky is getting? Update soon so I can know!! ></

Oh dear god, drama ensues and things get messier. Love Jimmy's reaction, of course. Seriously though,when people figure out that the baby isn't Zacky's, shits gonna hit the fan.

Oh my God, I'm smiling like a maniac from Jimmy's reaction, I just love it. You really make him feel alive. I can't for this to be updated again, it's amazing.

Damn it!
Omg when Brian asked her to get back with him and she was all like I can't b/c of her pride
I was like yes>:D you don't want him back......at all.......You want ZackyxD
Omg FUCKEN Michelle telling everybody>:D about Zacky being a dad
now she's gonna look dumb when she finds out it's BrianxD
I think the others might suspect it's not Zacky?!
Can't wait for the update:D

Whoa! That's so funny! Zacky is getting all the congratulations even though he's not the one with a kid on the way! It's all michelle's fault! Couldn't keep her month shut! I wonder what there gonna do now? Great update!!!:)

Well damn. At least Brian wants to be involved in the kid's life. And points for Charlotte for telling Brian she didn't want to get together with him just because of the baby. He doesn't need to go back to her just because of that. But he's definitely not happy with letting people think it's Zacky's. And Michelle just had to tell everyone. >< What a gossip. But I'm curious how ling Brian's just going to go along with that idea. Loved the update! :D

I'm team Zacky.. Brian may have started this but he fuckig ended it and there is nothing he can do to take that back. Even if he leaves Michelle the whole 'I'm going to work things out with my wife so this over' thing will never leave her and so therefore Zack deserves her more than Brian. He fucked up, whose to say he won't do it again? And if he does get her back and fucks up, I will castrate him, and then maybe it will be too late to try things with Zack. Oh, and if Brian thinks this baby will get her back in a flash without trying to prove himself then he's more messed up than I thought. I can't wait for more so please update soon again. :)

*shakes head with a sigh* I don't get men either, and how could Zacky not know he had frozen veggies?! On second thought, I don't wanna know. *scratches head* Ugh, so much is going on with these guys right now.
I don't know who to pick!!!

Update soon so I can make a quicker decision! lol

I love the ending!!! It's yours you blabbering idiot!!! Good one! I kinda hope she doesn't go back to him and give zacky a chance since he seems to like her :o but them again I love Brian! So it's tough choice! Great update!!!:)

Holy shit! I love it! I need more soon! Please like update now! It's soooo good!

"I didn't know I had frozen vegetables." I laughed so hard at that. XD I swear, guys are freaking ridiculous at times. But finding out Zacky was the one to convince Brian to work on his marriage? I think he was trying to do what he could to get Charlotte. And Brian really does care about her. It almost broke my heart. And now he just found out the baby's his? I have no clue how he react. In a good way I hope. I don't want to hate him haha. But I'm torn between the two guys. I don't know which one I like best. >< Great update!

Omfg why did you have to end it like that-___-
Since the beginning I'm just like team ZackyXD
Fuck you Brian Ahhhh some emotions......she better not take him back!
Lmao Brian freaking out knowing it's not Zacky's babyx)
I didn't think Brian actually wanted to be with Charlotte now Zacky's the bad guy>/
Well Brian is definitely going to be thrilled knowing its his baby-___-
Can't wait for the next update:DD

hahaha Brian is such a dope, I swear he needs to think before he acts lol
I wonder what he will say about the baby being his....
I have no idea whose team im on right now hopefully ill make up my mind the next few chapters

Ahhh I can't pick sides like one chapter I would be on team Zack then the next it's team Brian!! Ahh so hard to choose from......update! Please.

I am on Zacky's side, and this was another great update! I think it is kinda funny how Brian was just like, 'was it some idiot that bailed on you?' and he had bailed on her! Keep up the great work! I also kinda think it would be cool if she was with Zack.

It's ironic Brian's asking if its some idiot that left her because thats him. I don't even know what to think right now, like its hard to pick a side. Brians the badass that every girl loves while Zackys the cutey pie that's so sweet to her... sighhh