You're My Favorite Song - Comments

  • TheMisdirected

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    Hey I'm here because of Comment Swap I'm glad it sent me to your story! I think this is a really neat idea for a story, I really do hope you keep this up; I think it's a really good story so far! Well done! I’m going to recommend this story!
    July 5th, 2012 at 11:11am
  • mmmbbbmb

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    -comment swap-

    i like the style of your writing..you also describe things very well. Your main character seems very cute and relatable and thats very important haha. The last two comments talked about the cuteness of the pictures in your layout and they are very cute haha. I would read more because I liek your style. There were some grammar errors here and there but other than that, good luck. I wish you well on your story!
    July 5th, 2012 at 06:49am
  • chains-of-prometheus

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    Comment swap brought me here.
    As HelpImAlive said, the pictures are a adorable. I love the layout, too.
    your writing style is awesome and I wanna read more of this.
    I noticed very sew grammatical errors and nothing else.
    thanks to comment t swap from bringing me here and your writing this!
    July 4th, 2012 at 05:29am
  • HelpI'mAlive

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    [Comment Swap]
    For starters, I adore the title. So cute :) "You're My Favorite Song"...aw :) I also like the little pictures you have running along the top. They're all really cool - I especially like the one on the far right - it's so adorable :D

    Anyways - on to the story :)
    I love how the story started - the first chapter was really amazing and I just love how it opened. I love how she says "Music is my only true love, aside from family, doesn't bother me." I love her attitude and everything.

    I like your writing style, too! Keep this up, dear :D
    July 4th, 2012 at 04:48am
  • little_dreamer

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    Seems good... Keep it up...
    March 17th, 2012 at 03:56am
  • NaraNocturnal

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    I love how you started your story. It's amazing so far. Can't wait to read more.
    February 21st, 2012 at 01:43am