Holding on to You - Comments

Comment swap brought me here. The prologue is pretty short and sweet. Enough to draw a reader in. I've never read any Twilight fan fiction, although I do enjoy Twilighg. All of the comments are from 3 years ago... Are you still planning on updating this?

Intreseting♥
More,please?:"D

Can't wait for more :)

Can't wait for more :)

Really liked this, left me wanting more so please update soon!

I will confess to you that I hate Twilight as well. I'm sorry that we don't share the same views, but that's not what this is about. We all have our own tastes and kudos for having the courage to write something and post it. I enjoyed the plot line, despite my tastes, and I'm curious about your story, BUT! I must admit that this sounds a lot like rape and torture for the girl and even for Emmett. He's doing something he doesn't want to do and even if the girl wants him what Emmett will do to her will..it's just unjustifiable. Which makes me hope that something comes and bites Rosalie and even Emmett in the neck thricefold. It sounds like it has potential, so keep at it hun.

Comment Swap.
Okay, I hate Twilight with a passion so I feel like I couldn't fully understand this. It's just a prologue, but I'm not attracted to it at all, I'm sorry. It's too short for me to evaluate your writing style, as well. Don't get me wrong, but this fandom is something I will never understand. Kepp it up, either way, we couldn't all like the same things :p

Can't wait to read more!!