NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! She's supposed to fall for Ronnie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You better fix this!!!
Anyways.... Thank you so much for continuing! This is one of the first Ronnie Radke fics I started reading and I want to know what happens!! I know how awful writers block can be, I'm suffering from it majorly right now!!
Just a quick comment to say, I really hope you haven't given up on this story!! I love Ronnie and this is one of the best stories I've read about him and I really can't wait to see what happens!!
Finally! it all makes sense! ahaha. This was a very epic update. I can't wait to read what you come up with next. You are a very creative writer, And i like your style. I definitively hope you don't give up on this or any other stories, Because I see them going places, Or at least, As far as something can go on Mibba, ahaha.
This is an awesome story, but the dialog gets hard to follow. Try using some double quotation marks, and look up some spacing techniques. Otherwise, I can't wait to read more!