Time of Your Life - Comments

I love how you used Green Day's song in this. And I love how your picture is so pink and are feet. I should give you how intriguing the picture is, it makes the reader get caught up. Kiki is a very nice character by the way, with a one shot that's a must and you did great with making someone love Kiki in one chapter. That's something you must be proud of. :)

This has got to be my favorite out of the many you've written. I love how this one centers around Kiki's internal struggles, how all the past events shaped her as a person. She takes her anger out on herself, which I find some people do (while most do to others). The throwing-the-bear-bottle-at-mirror thing is such a wonderful way of showing the literal sense at striking/blaming oneself for events that impacted on lives. Also her history with the father that walked out on her leaves an everlasting impact and I think that it is realistic that something like this would make a person react like the way Kiki did. Plus, I love that she's a hot mess and doesn't give a fuck about it. Oh and she had a great time :D

Your mom doesn't count anyway; she has to love you unconditionally.

Reminds me of this book I was reading:) This philosophy is debatable and I just love that it can be looked at in many different ways