I do love this!! The French is a little... Iffy to me. Do you use a translator?
I love the plot line. Geno makes me so happy haha I also love the random French thrown in. I don't know of they are like the Americans I know that speak French, but I throw in a lot of French or Spanish when I talk. It's cool to see characters do that.
I love reading Kris stories, he sounds like he's got his work cut out for him. This is going to be an interesting challenge, I love how confident he is and how he isn't fazed by Aurelie's attitude. Can't wait to read more.