Slightly Bruised and Broken From Our Head on Collision - Comments

So I just stumbled across this, and decided to start reading... this story is really different than others I've read.
Usually I read Alex love interest stories, so it amazes me that this one was able to keep my interest, but I think just the uniqueness and sincerity of it did, truly.
It kind of got a bit jumpy at some points, with some of the rushed transitions and the switching emotions... but other than those moments kind of throwing me off, I really enjoyed what you had of this. It was a great story; a bummer that it ended so tragically, but that definitely made it all the more unique, because I definitely wasn't expecting that ending, at all. It threw a curve in the situation and was not predicted in the slightest; predictability can get a bit too cliche, so I enjoyed that you made your story different.
And, yeah; it's been years since you posted it, but I just wanted to leave my feedback to show you that people like me are still stumbling across your story and reading.
Great job with it! And kudos for sticking it out and finishing it.

@ partypoison7
Maybes;3

omfg and did i see some om&m refferences?

Then you just make her start her own band or not do anything because shes ...idk, idek

Moooollie that was brilliant and I must admit a few tears came to my eyes in the last paragraph. Excellent writing my lovely

@ partypoison7
Ahaha I didn't want her in the band anymore though hahah:3

yes, you really should omfg. I was like nooooooo she can't die its so unfair

@ partypoison7
Awh I'm sorry): do you think I should do an epilogue for Jack or?

I am crying omg

Im in love with this story! Jack is definitely my favourite ;) keep the updates coming!

thank you! and i was thinking about that to be honest, but i was kinda thinking about doing a shoutout on twitter and seeing who wants to fill it... :) but thank you! <3

Love the story so far! Maybe you can call her Jasey or one of the other song titles? Just throwing it out there :)