Dear Jack - Comments

  • mallrat

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    This is such a good story ! The theme is so original, and it's really reminding me why I use to indulge in band fics all the time Mr. Green Anyway, I really love what you have going on ! All Time Low is a band I've adored since middle school, so it brings back so many good memories reading such well fanfictions supporting them In Love The way you write is so unique, I absolutely adore it ! good job.
    February 24th, 2018 at 07:05am
  • Okay?

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    This is sooo good. Ugh the theme is so original; I know writers block is awful, but maybe just try to post a chapter a month? I eagerly await more as this plot seems very cute; and easy for me as a reader to really understand.
    August 17th, 2016 at 03:39am
  • bluebloodschick

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    OMG!! I really loved your story so far!! Can't wait to read more.
    April 21st, 2016 at 12:48am
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    @ f0reverbr0ken

    Thank you so much for being so patient with this fic, I promise you that it will be updated as soon as possible; I've actually teamed up with a good friend of mine so she's actually writing the next chapter but as soon as it's complete, it will be uploaded. But thank you SO much for sticking with it :D
    November 14th, 2015 at 04:05pm
  • f0reverbr0ken

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    Come back. I miss this fic so much.
    November 12th, 2015 at 08:35am
  • Violent Fetish

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    Hey! I enjoyed the story! Surprisingly, because I've never been a fan of band fics really, but yours pleasantly surprised me. I don't know the novel, or film of dear John, well, I didn't see them because it's not really something I would be interested in reading. But, like I said, you had me pleasantly surprised.

    You're writing is good, fluid paragraphing, and you have moments of pure brilliance that have me completely mesmerised. And I'm now officially a Jalex fan, so consider yourself lucky, you turned me! I've finished this aNd I'm going to go find some more.
    July 28th, 2015 at 08:19am
  • SignalFire

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    I hope you update this soon! I've missed this story and can't wait to read what else you have planned for it!
    June 4th, 2015 at 01:46pm
  • SignalFire

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    Seeing that this had been updated made me log on here for the first time in nearly a year!
    So excited to see how the rewrite pans out! Seriously love this story and can't wait to see what you have in store for Alex and Jack.
    Looking forward to the next update! Great job Lottie! :-D
    April 27th, 2015 at 05:25pm
  • Dean Winchester;

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    @ ReginaRR
    Hey, I am doing well thank you, I hope that you are too!
    Thank you so much for reading what's posted so far and for the lovely comment; that being said... I have kind of lost where this story is going but I will try and read through it again to see if anything new comes to me as I do really miss writing this story. I really do appreciate everyone's patience with it and me!
    October 19th, 2014 at 05:27pm
  • ReginaRR

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    Oh god, please tell me you stopped working on this story. It's beautiful and I'm curious about Alex's response. Hope you're doing well darling ❤
    October 15th, 2014 at 11:54pm
  • lilynotlyla

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    I get a little nervous when comment swap sends me stories about bands that I don't know because I'm never sure what to say. I don't know the characters, so how am I supposed to know if they're right? This is so well done, though. I especially like:

    "Needless to say, I jumped at the opportunity to take this task instead. The lecturer who set it believes that “young people” these days are too preoccupied with their social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter that they don’t understand what it is to sit down and write a letter. I didn’t know what to expect from it at first, but it’s kinda relaxing. I don't know, I must just be weird like that."

    It's so, so true. I see it with my sister and her friends all the time. Well done on this :)
    July 8th, 2014 at 05:37am
  • GeeEdwards

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    I didn't know what to expect when I saw the title of this story, but seeing it was based on Dear John kind of intrigued me to start reading it, when comment swap bought me here I thought I would give it a chance and I am so glad I did, I am loving the story so far, the responses and sent letters are amazing, it just makes me want to read more and more of this story, i hope you keep updating regularly, i am just engrossed in this right now!!
    June 13th, 2014 at 12:58am
  • La Notte Dei Demoni.

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    I'm not a big All Time Low fan, so I was a little weary when I was sent here by comment swap, but from what I have read so far, this is very well thought-out and the idea is pretty unique! You put a lot of detail in here, and that's lovely, if I liked All Time Low a whole lot more I would have probably enjoyed this a lot more, that's more down to me than your writing, though!
    June 12th, 2014 at 01:28am
  • f0reverbr0ken

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    Ive missed this so much. I'm so happy you updated and I can't wait to see what's Alex's response to the letter.
    April 28th, 2014 at 09:19am
  • BulletProofRevenge

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    You updated! Yayayaay
    April 28th, 2014 at 04:56am
  • Dean Winchester;

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    @ Gaskarthloveme

    Thank you so much! I'm good and I hope that you're well too!
    I've actually finished University now (just have one more essay to hand in on Friday) so I'll be able to update a lot more :D Thank YOU for taking the time out of your day to read the update!
    April 28th, 2014 at 02:06am
  • Gaskarthloveme

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    HOLY CRAAAAAP!! I'M SO HAPPYY RIGHTNOW!!! THIS CALLLS FOR A TOTAL RE READ OF THE WHOLE STORY CAUSE IT'S BEEN SO LONG. I hope you're well :) :) thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule and updating!
    April 28th, 2014 at 01:40am
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    @ HarleighAnn

    Thank you and just so everyone knows, I have actually been trying to work on the next update but with University work and other things happening, I just haven't really found the time or inspiration to write BUT... I have made a pretty decent start on at least four other updates for this plus a completed chapter that isn't going to be needed for a little while.
    December 4th, 2013 at 06:45pm
  • HarleighAnn

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    I really hope you can update soon, this story is so wonderful
    December 2nd, 2013 at 06:17am
  • penizwentz

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    Im in love with this story, its so well written im glad i found it. Update soon!
    July 1st, 2013 at 08:35pm