September 6th, 2008 at 03:53pm
Very good writing. I kind of know how you feel, though the person who left me wasn't human. Goldie was my horse. I was really close to her; I called her my big furry older sister. She died suddenly in December, and things just aren't the same. I still feel guilty because now I look back at the last time I saw her and I feel like it's my fault she's dead, like I should have known something was wrong.
As you said, life goes on, just in a different way. Your story actually helped me out, to sort out how I'm feeling and all. I should try writing about Goldie... it would probably make me feel better.
But anyway, wonderful writing! I'd give this two thumbs up.
Very well done :D