Perfect ending hun! It was sad that her parents didn't show up to her wedding, but Jimmy walking her down was beautiful. You did a wonderful job on your first 3-shot.
Yay!! That was a great ending for sure. I'm glad Jimmy got a girl too. I really liked that he walked her down the aisle that was sweet. You did a great job. Rip Jimmy.
I told you that you were getting better. This is so freaking cute and everything about it flows smoothly. The loving and fluffy sex scene was not only super cute, but it was also hot. I'm excited to see how this ends. Nicely done honey! XD
aawe yay they admitted their love for one another!! that's just awesome :D they're totally cute together.. and the sex scene was not cute, it was hot ;D
Heheh well that sex scene was amazing!! Hahaha I'm all tingly (sorry for tmi) But yeah, you're a great writer and you don't give yourself enough credit. I felt like I was there just watching her and Matt like it was real life. Now you've got me all inspired. =)
Aaaah man! it's so cute when Matt is being all jealous and insecure <3 and brian messing with him!! hahah :P can't wait to see who will be the 1st one to tell the other that they love each other :D