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  • Matt Sanders;

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    Damn! That was amazing and really?? they killed him, he deserved it
    March 7th, 2013 at 02:25am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    DAMN!
    That was awesome
    I didn't expect them to kill Alex
    Seriously amazing job
    I'm sad it's over
    March 23rd, 2012 at 05:28pm
  • CountSynula

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    Well hell yeah!!
    That was amazing.
    lol like this is one of my favorite stories by
    you now. I like how you made it totally seem real
    that they were in love and being two girls.
    The sex scene was hot and made me all tingly.
    Lmao made me want to be lesbian.
    You are a great writer and I feel happy and priviledged that
    you are my friend.
    I love you soo much. <3
    March 23rd, 2012 at 07:59am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Way to go Deanna
    I'm proud of her for standing up to and leaving Alex
    March 13th, 2012 at 06:10pm
  • Star Angel

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    update soon
    March 13th, 2012 at 07:53am
  • CountSynula

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    Ahh!! I loved it.
    Really interesting!!
    I cannot wait to see what happens next.
    I'm glad she left that dirt bag Alex.
    March 13th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • Sugarplum_19

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    Good for Deanna finally leaving that asswipe!!
    March 13th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Oh my god poor Deanna
    Jenna completely crush her
    Why did she say those things?
    I don't believe that's how she really feels
    Jenna loves Deanna
    Update soon

    :}
    March 12th, 2012 at 05:44pm
  • Star Angel

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    Update soon
    March 12th, 2012 at 06:19am
  • sullenriotxx

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    Sounds like Alex needs me to kick his fucking ass!Unless the bitch is tryna LITTERALLY kill you or your family you NEVER put your hands on a woman.Fucking prick..Geesh.But I still love David Boreanaz(the picture of the guy you used!)Keep it up!I can't wait for more!!
    March 12th, 2012 at 05:56am
  • CountSynula

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    LOL Corr Corr's comment was killer lol.
    This is really my first femmeslash I've ever read and it was
    a damn good one!
    I am all sad because Jenna said the things she said.
    I hope that she was lying!
    Can't wait to read more.
    You are one amazing Lady!
    March 11th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • H u n t e r .

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    Hot damnnn
    March 11th, 2012 at 03:54am
  • MamaZ

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    *bowing down* Damn! Damn! Damn! Where the hell did all this come from?? You're a naughty little girl and I love it. That was very hot and you have every right to be proud of this, I'm pretty this is one of your best works yet. You're doing a great job. I have to agree with xMandiblesx, your writing gets better every time you do something new. I can tell you know, this is the only story that has nothing to do with Avenged that I've read and liked. That mind of yours is freaking amazing and you yourself are a kick ass writer. *fans self* Hell I can't get over how hot that was. Everything about the chapter was just right. Fantastic job hun and I mean that!
    March 10th, 2012 at 08:47pm
  • Legendary.

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    That was hot. I loved it, really well done. You write really well I loved your descriptions of everything.
    March 9th, 2012 at 10:29pm
  • CountSynula

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    :O That was so hot!!
    Femmeslash rules.
    Your writing just keeps getting better and better
    and that was by far one of the hottest sex scenes you've done
    to date! Haha and it didn't even have Matt in it, so that's really saying something.
    Good job Lady. I'm proud of you!
    March 9th, 2012 at 07:27am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Hell yeah first comment*
    March 9th, 2012 at 07:08am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Help yeah first commeny
    That was HOT!
    Can't wait for more
    Please I'm begging you update soon

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    March 9th, 2012 at 07:07am
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