Undying Devotion - Comments

Damn! That was amazing and really?? they killed him, he deserved it

DAMN!
That was awesome
I didn't expect them to kill Alex
Seriously amazing job
I'm sad it's over

Well hell yeah!!
That was amazing.
lol like this is one of my favorite stories by
you now. I like how you made it totally seem real
that they were in love and being two girls.
The sex scene was hot and made me all tingly.
Lmao made me want to be lesbian.
You are a great writer and I feel happy and priviledged that
you are my friend.
I love you soo much. <3

Way to go Deanna
I'm proud of her for standing up to and leaving Alex

update soon

Ahh!! I loved it.
Really interesting!!
I cannot wait to see what happens next.
I'm glad she left that dirt bag Alex.

Good for Deanna finally leaving that asswipe!!

Oh my god poor Deanna
Jenna completely crush her
Why did she say those things?
I don't believe that's how she really feels
Jenna loves Deanna
Update soon

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Update soon

Sounds like Alex needs me to kick his fucking ass!Unless the bitch is tryna LITTERALLY kill you or your family you NEVER put your hands on a woman.Fucking prick..Geesh.But I still love David Boreanaz(the picture of the guy you used!)Keep it up!I can't wait for more!!

LOL Corr Corr's comment was killer lol.
This is really my first femmeslash I've ever read and it was
a damn good one!
I am all sad because Jenna said the things she said.
I hope that she was lying!
Can't wait to read more.
You are one amazing Lady!

Hot damnnn

*bowing down* Damn! Damn! Damn! Where the hell did all this come from?? You're a naughty little girl and I love it. That was very hot and you have every right to be proud of this, I'm pretty this is one of your best works yet. You're doing a great job. I have to agree with xMandiblesx, your writing gets better every time you do something new. I can tell you know, this is the only story that has nothing to do with Avenged that I've read and liked. That mind of yours is freaking amazing and you yourself are a kick ass writer. *fans self* Hell I can't get over how hot that was. Everything about the chapter was just right. Fantastic job hun and I mean that!

That was hot. I loved it, really well done. You write really well I loved your descriptions of everything.

:O That was so hot!!
Femmeslash rules.
Your writing just keeps getting better and better
and that was by far one of the hottest sex scenes you've done
to date! Haha and it didn't even have Matt in it, so that's really saying something.
Good job Lady. I'm proud of you!

Hell yeah first comment*

Help yeah first commeny
That was HOT!
Can't wait for more
Please I'm begging you update soon

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