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I've never really read paranormal stories before, but yours seems really interesting! I've never even heard of the Zack Files, so it was a bit confusing, but still, it was good and I really enjoyed the amount of detail you used! Good job! Looking forward to reading more.

Interesting, I believe that Samantha is somebody that is going to take the place of Gwen later on in the story.

This was pretty awesome. I liked how you explained the empath bond between Zack and Sam.

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Spencer, of course had to bring his camera to try and document whatever paranormally might happen to the two.

Also, you might want to change paranormally to paranormal activity or something along those lines.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Awesome job with all the details.
And I'm stoked to see that you're going to have some paranormal stuff going on.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Also, for people who haven't heard of The Zack Files before, you might want to add in some details about the school in general, like its appearance and what the uniforms look like. Just a suggestion.

Great start. I can't wait to read more.
The Zack Files was one of my favorite shows when I was younger. :)