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Author [Alliex]
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Interesting start ! (: I can't wait to read the rest.
Just one thing, colours don't need capital letters as they aren't proper nouns and 'Princess' should have a capital because he's calling her it, so it's her name.
Otherwise, well done. xx
February 23rd, 2012 at 02:29pm
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Just one thing, colours don't need capital letters as they aren't proper nouns and 'Princess' should have a capital because he's calling her it, so it's her name.
Otherwise, well done. xx