Seriously? Aw :( Well...then i simply just made up a beach in Arizona XD i really dont want to re-write it in anyway lol and i'll be updating at least once every week. maybe twice if you're good to me :)
I love it ♥ So so so so much ! But...There is no beach in Arizona ! Coming from the girl who lived here since she was just in the mother's womb ! I wish there was a beach but no..no beach xP but anyways update soon : )
This is a pretty cool story. Punctuation and grammar are good, as well as the beginning of the story and the teasers at the end of each chapter. I hope you continue this story, I would surely keep reading! *subscribes*
AwhMaGawdd<3 I LOVE IT! Update soonn? Please ;D I love her tattoo, it sounds cute ;3 Andd, I love how he emphasizes 'sex'. Hes freaking sexy -.- I want moree. ;3