LOL I LOVED IT <3 i'm so speechless, it was...hot XD oh the maine *bursts out laughing* I CAN'T STOP! Awesome, amazing, loved it :3 thanks for writing this <3
OH MY GOD. tg5iohaejwrt4i that was.. interesting(; and when i read "John O'Callaghan did not commit" I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING OMG but anyway, good job on this
OH MY FUCKING GOD. that was fucking hilarious. i don't even know what to say. it was...LMFAO god i just died. "Does that mean we're family now?!" Oh my god. Okay. That was good. Thank you very much.
The mere thought of The Maine having a five some made me start drooling. XD
Reading it.. Well, that's a whole different story. THIS WAS AMAZING. FANTASTIC. DELCIOUS. HAWT.
I'm starting to run out of words to descrive this well written piece of magic! :D
It was so perfect and... so squeezable. o: MY INNOCENT HUSBAND IS THINKING SUCH DIRT THOUGHTS. Such a turn on. lawl.
He should grow a dick. Like John's big and totally suckable one... o.O
"How was I supposed to know he was homo for me?!" HOW DARE HE?!?! D:<
"You're such an asshole, Garrett!" Kennedy yelled YOU CAN SAY THAT AGAIN!
That gorgeous dick belonged to Kennedy. Not Garrett. John's penis was supposed to be in Kennedy's mouth. Not fucking Garrett's. Whoah. Kennedy sounds possessive. XD Reminds me of John in The Twix Boy. LOL
"Hi, Pat," Garrett said shyly. Is this the same boy that was practically mauling John's penis earlier? lolololol.
He snuck up behind Pat, who had no pants on, and pulled down his underwear. You're really giving me ideas to start on my John and Pat slash.. x)
John had just stolen his virginity. Yep. That's it. John's fixing to go rape Pat in it. @_@
Or at least, that was what Tim was for. I love how you seem to include Tim in almost everything. ROTFL. I just... yeah.
John hoped that the kid didn't want a relationship with him. John O'Callaghan did not commit. o__O JOHN. HOW DARE YOU NOT WANT RAY BOY! >.<
Pat had his eye on Kyle Burns. NO. YOU BETTER WATCH IT! I WILL RIP YOUR EYES OUT! -_____-
OVERALL. This is mind blowing. Just that. It's too good for words or even my response.
Oh my goodness! Girl!! You are FUCKING amazing <33333 oh that was indeed orgasmic. Oh wow! I just love you right now. Your writing is just ahagagkg fuck me!!
Oh my goodness! Girl!! You are FUCKING amazing <33333 oh that was indeed orgasmic. Oh wow! I just love you right now. Your writing is just ahagagkg fuck me!!
oh my god, I usually don't read slash but I stumbled upon this and was intrigued. While reading this I laughed, felt bothered, felt happy, among many other things. Your writing is really really great! I love The Maine, and this was really a pleasant surprise! Good luck in the contest, I hope you win! (: