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Loved it. I like how you saved absolutely no one, really gives it a warm, fuzzy atmosphere.

March 1st, 2012 at 05:35am
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I loved. I had to read it twice to find something to give advice on. You really have grown as a writer, try and very your sentence structure a little

February 25th, 2012 at 03:10am

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