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  • b3stfriend4lif3

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    Do a sequel!!! It means this story will go on :) and I really want it to go on as its such a great story
    March 24th, 2012 at 08:45pm
  • rainb0wp00p

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    you should do a sequel :D but then that means this story will end. *sob sob*
    March 24th, 2012 at 10:19am
  • MusicLover525

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    I think a sequel always sounds good and he characters are interesting, too!! So no, I wouldnt mine a sequel! :DD
    Misa is always comparing Gage to Cian, isn't it obvious that she has stronger feelings towards Cian?! Why does she feels attracted to Gage when she could have Cian? I mean, he has hopes [for the future] ;)
    March 24th, 2012 at 07:02am
  • CAFFEINE!!!

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    “They are actually pretty cute,” Caroline said with a wink and Cian rolled his eyes.

    “Come on, it’s pretty bad that you all look exactly like them. That’s like calling yourselves cute.”

    Caroline grinned wickedly as she swayed from the room. “Exactly.”

    I DIED. So funny hahaha
    March 24th, 2012 at 03:51am
  • CAFFEINE!!!

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    I LOVED the edited versions so much better! It definitely had a good flow to it. It was like opening up a Christmas present and realizing it was AMAZING:)
    March 24th, 2012 at 03:37am
  • living myth

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    Ooh sequel :o Do it! I think you should! It'd be fun and definitely interesting:D
    Update soon, gorgeous;D
    March 24th, 2012 at 03:30am
  • Call_me_Dot

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    i like this a lot :)
    March 24th, 2012 at 12:44am
  • living myth

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    HOLY CRAP I LIKE THIS CHICKY
    I really liked Jordan, I didn't expect him to cheat like that. I mean, I knew he cheated from before the changes, but it still seems to surprise me. I don't know, I guess I kinda wished he'd be better than that.
    I like Gage. From how Misa acted while impersonating him, he seems nice. But Cian and Misa are still perfect togethor. Gage is not the one for her c:
    Update soon, lovely, and save me some donuts:3
    March 24th, 2012 at 12:29am
  • MusicLover525

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    Hell! I wished Cian was there!! I hope Misa will tell him about Jordan!! Ôó
    And what's with his parents anyways?? They won't send Cian away, right?? It's nothing serious, is it?! O_O
    Noooo!! I want Cian an Misa together... Can we cross Gage out of th picture?? :b
    March 24th, 2012 at 12:28am
  • rainb0wp00p

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    agjdfkljhdklfhjklh I need the next chapter now holy crap
    March 23rd, 2012 at 11:42pm
  • b3stfriend4lif3

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    I really like the changes, either way your an amazing writer
    March 23rd, 2012 at 10:47am
  • Call_me_Dot

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    i like the changes :)
    March 23rd, 2012 at 07:33am
  • living myth

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    Ohmy! Revised chapters up in here!
    I like the edited versions much better, you're right, it does flow much better.
    I think Cian should be one of the butler dudes, but not Jordan. I dunno why, but I like that better than the two of them working togethor. Besides, when Misa and Cian get togethor it'd be awkward for Cian if he has to work with Jordan.
    Update soon, lovely!:D
    March 23rd, 2012 at 02:42am
  • CAFFEINE!!!

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    So I really like this, but you it seems a bit unrealistic, both of them finding out they're being cheated on on the same day, then right after Misa was done talking about opening a bakery but didnt want to take away Chief's customers, she calls and says she can own the bakery, even if it is only for a year. It's a good story and I really like, I just feel like you rush things in it:P
    March 22nd, 2012 at 09:46pm
  • Call_me_Dot

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    awwww <3 I kind of feel if you ever re-write or edit this story in the future, you should change how she will take over for chief bc it's wayyyy to coincidental, even for a fictional story :p lol
    March 22nd, 2012 at 12:58am
  • b3stfriend4lif3

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    Aww how cute, they end up having a night in on valentines
    March 21st, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • Tweetybird13

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    Love will always find a way
    March 21st, 2012 at 03:38am
  • living myth

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    JORDAN HAD A FIANCE AND TERRA CHEATED?? WTF IS GOING ON HERE?!?! I almost started crying. Twice. Holy crap. Screw recovery, Cian and Misa need to be togethor right now. Make it happen, lovely;)
    Update soon, gorgeous!:D
    March 21st, 2012 at 12:40am
  • Call_me_Dot

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    I knewwww it! But I was surprised about terra :( At least cian and her can be together noww <3
    March 20th, 2012 at 10:33pm
  • b3stfriend4lif3

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    :O Jordan had a fiancé and Terra cheated! let Cian and Misa get together!!!
    March 20th, 2012 at 09:50pm