I think a sequel always sounds good and he characters are interesting, too!! So no, I wouldnt mine a sequel! :DD Misa is always comparing Gage to Cian, isn't it obvious that she has stronger feelings towards Cian?! Why does she feels attracted to Gage when she could have Cian? I mean, he has hopes [for the future] ;)
I LOVED the edited versions so much better! It definitely had a good flow to it. It was like opening up a Christmas present and realizing it was AMAZING:)
HOLY CRAP I LIKE THIS CHICKY I really liked Jordan, I didn't expect him to cheat like that. I mean, I knew he cheated from before the changes, but it still seems to surprise me. I don't know, I guess I kinda wished he'd be better than that. I like Gage. From how Misa acted while impersonating him, he seems nice. But Cian and Misa are still perfect togethor. Gage is not the one for her c: Update soon, lovely, and save me some donuts:3
Hell! I wished Cian was there!! I hope Misa will tell him about Jordan!! Ôó And what's with his parents anyways?? They won't send Cian away, right?? It's nothing serious, is it?! O_O Noooo!! I want Cian an Misa together... Can we cross Gage out of th picture?? :b
Ohmy! Revised chapters up in here! I like the edited versions much better, you're right, it does flow much better. I think Cian should be one of the butler dudes, but not Jordan. I dunno why, but I like that better than the two of them working togethor. Besides, when Misa and Cian get togethor it'd be awkward for Cian if he has to work with Jordan. Update soon, lovely!:D
So I really like this, but you it seems a bit unrealistic, both of them finding out they're being cheated on on the same day, then right after Misa was done talking about opening a bakery but didnt want to take away Chief's customers, she calls and says she can own the bakery, even if it is only for a year. It's a good story and I really like, I just feel like you rush things in it:P
awwww <3 I kind of feel if you ever re-write or edit this story in the future, you should change how she will take over for chief bc it's wayyyy to coincidental, even for a fictional story :p lol
JORDAN HAD A FIANCE AND TERRA CHEATED?? WTF IS GOING ON HERE?!?! I almost started crying. Twice. Holy crap. Screw recovery, Cian and Misa need to be togethor right now. Make it happen, lovely;) Update soon, gorgeous!:D