Caught Up In the Stars - Comments

I still love this. Just read it again. Felt like I should let you know

Honestly this is some of the best work I've seen on Mibba and I'm shocked that it doesn't have more recs. I'm definitely gonna try and get word out about this because it's amazing and it deserves the recognition.

>.< Too cute! I wuvs it soooooo muches! XD

I've read this about 5 times. I love it so much, blah. ): I'm sad it's a one-shot, but it's so fucking fantastic!

Okay, so, I wasn't going to go without reading one more story, and holy cow I'm so glad I stayed. At first I was wondering what the picture of the elevator numbers had to do with everything but I get it now
Great idea for a student/teacher story. You're such a talented writer. Now I'm going to sleep

I love this so much.

Beautiful! Elicit romances are the best :D

I read this yesterday, sorry I didn't get to comment. /:
Anyways.

Okie dokie. So I really thought this story was well planned and thought out. I loved your descriptions of each character. Both Brendon and Ryan had their own personalities, and you really nailed their personalities. I wish that the old P!ATD was back together too. :(

There were a few grammatical mistakes, but I could still read it. So that's good, compared to a lot of stories I read around here... >.> It's just things like:
‘I just,’ He spat angrily...
It should be ‘I just,’ he spat angrily. Don't forget your lowercase's after you split a sentence. But you did remember the comma, which was awesome. Most people forget that.

I absolutely adored your situation. The whole "stuck in an elevator after breaking up with your student" type thing. I loved your awkward atmosphere that you created for them at the beginning and then the gradual getting closer to one another. The part where Brendon calms down Ryan just kind of hit me. It was really sweet and made me smile. :3

The very ending where Brendon makes the fort is absolutely adorable. God. It was so sweet I got diabetes. <3

Overall, you did a pretty kickass job with this. So bravo! You should be proud of this :D Especially with the word count!

Thanks for getting it in so early! Well... technically it was a prewrite. But still. It makes my job so much easier. :D

PS. The whole elevator sex was totally hot. (;

This was definitely worth my time! When I read that it was a standalone I was happy because I usually have a very short attention span - I expected 2,000 - 3,000 words maximum! However, you managed to attain the unattainable and you kept my attention throughout! I really love the student/teacher slash pairing, despite not actively being part of the Panic! fandom. It really is the perfect slash one shot and you have such a way with words! xx

This story is amazing <3