Possibly the Best Dream Finn Hudson Ever Had (That Didn't Somehow Involve Rachel Berry) - Comments

I enjoyed reading this, it wasn’t what I expected and I thought it was a really original idea (I know this Finn’s from Glee but I read him as an OC) and it made me laugh! I love your writing style; your flow makes it feel as if the actions are in a dream – I like that you barely mentioned the scenery or the appearance of characters so that it was hazy like a dream usually is. The piece had good flow and you dealt with dialogue very well. I like the passing mention of Rachel in this; it shows dedication and love over the craziest of dreams.

The layout is lovely too, it’s really nice and warm and easy to read. Good job!

This really made my day. Phil Collins is my most favorite singer ever. I also loved him in his Genesis days. <3

This whole story was funny. :)

LOL! Best part:

"Phil Collins?" Finn asked, equally incredulous and confused, "is that seriously you?"

"No, Finn," the other man answered, his voice alone confirming his identity, "Not seriously. This is just a dream."

"Oh," Finn replied, slightly crestfallen.

That was wonderful, short and sweet. Made me smile from ear to ear. How I love Finn And your wonderful writing!

This made me giggle.
Oh Finn :')