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Oh wow, your descriptions are incredible. Like I can literally imagine everything that is going on. And I like how you chose to make a character totally out of the actual character list.

Oh and you should put a description, I mean I'm open to all Vampire Diaries stories but otherwise I don't know what it is about unless the description tells me. But I'm glad I took a chance on it. :)

The layout is simple but amazing at the same time. The story is amazing. You are not given enough credit. Keep writing!

I'm really confused so far because I'm not sure how she's part of Katerina's bloodline. I'm intrigued so far though. Although so far the only error I've seen is that you need to be careful with quotation marks. If you're putting quotes within a quote, then you need to switch to single quotes.

The layout is gorgeous.
Absolutely gorgeous.

I also think the story is as beautiful as the layout c:
You get my two thumbs up.

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I must say, the layout is gorgeous. I really love the way it looks, especially the fact that it is so plain yet so elegant. As far as the story goes, it was brilliant. Does it happen to be a "Vampire Diaries" Fan fiction? I recall the Salvatore's and Mystic Fall being pronounced at the end of the first chapter.

Well, good luck on your story. It was great.

First of all, the layout is beautiful.

Secondly, I think what I liked about this piece the most was your great talent in description. Like Enlightened Change said, you have a talent for stringing the description of the scenery and people throughout the entirety of the work rather than summing it all up in one long paragraph. That, is truly refreshing. I wish I possessed that skill.

As of late, I haven't read many stories about vampires. They have all seemed way too cliche for my taste. But, I'm am very happy to say that you may have gotten me out of my funk. I really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to reading lots more of it! The plot, so far, seems really interesting and it has me intrigued. The cliff hanger really has me wishing you had at least one more chapter posted. ;D And because of that, I'm going to be subscribing. Good work!

I refuse to believe I am your first commenter. This was really good, I mean like really I’m subscribing now. What I love most is just the way you’re subtly describing her surroundings without taking a whole paragraph to do it, it’s much more natural. I also like how Miranda’s personality is showing through the writing because it makes me more attached to her. Another thing I’d like to compliment is the mystery it has because you want to know why this teenaged girl is traveling and what she plans on doing, leaving a cliff hanger at the end about these two brothers and a bit of magic.

Overall it’s really well written and I can’t think of something you can improve on! :)

~Nikki