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  • babygurl1944

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    I think the story rocks
    March 18th, 2012 at 08:22pm
  • bublbabie

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    She must be out of her mind! COME ON! please update again soon
    March 14th, 2012 at 09:32pm
  • Yaribarr

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    Poor Sid :(
    March 14th, 2012 at 09:21pm
  • redsoxnation

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    is she out of her everloving mind to turn down sidney crosby???!!!! you have to update again soon and i really hope sidney goes running after her...
    March 14th, 2012 at 08:45pm
  • Star Angel

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    More soon please
    March 11th, 2012 at 09:47pm
  • jessclub

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    Love this story! I like that it's a bit different from the rest. The love interest isn't some ridiculous model type. Looking forward to reading more :)
    March 11th, 2012 at 01:34pm
  • Yaribarr

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    I just started reading your story and I love it!
    You had me at cupcakes....and Sidney Crosby
    update again soon.
    March 11th, 2012 at 02:18am
  • bublbabie

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    only 2 chapters and I am already in love with this story. Please update as much as possible. I can't wait to see how they actually get together
    March 11th, 2012 at 01:28am
  • erinn

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    I meant that you didn't use quotation marks " " when there was dialogue, so it was a bit confusing because the dialogue wasn't distinguished from the description written.
    March 8th, 2012 at 11:22pm
  • bublbabie

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    loved the first chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes
    March 3rd, 2012 at 08:19pm
  • Star Angel

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    Loved this update soon
    March 3rd, 2012 at 08:14am
  • erinn

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    It's very good so far, but the lay out and the fact that you do not use " " when stating dialogue is a bit confusing.
    March 3rd, 2012 at 04:41am
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