I really really loved this one. Just everything about it, really. Your style of writing is so perfect to read and the way you displayed it is plain amazing. :) I take it as your entry for ManicFame's contest so that's how I found it! xx, Kate. :3
This was rather impeccable. :) The detail was great. I was surprised, to be honest, I had never read a story by you, and once I finished, I thought, "Who wrote this? This was really great!" Amazing job. Can't wait for another short story, or story in general, by you!