Deceit Brings Fire - Comments

Random burst of inspiration, those are ALWAYS good!
Great update, I hope more burst come soon!

Good update :) I really liked it and everything (: and we saw it from Matt's point of view now is Brian getting Beccaa.? Lol. I hope :) and hopefully they fix it or something. Update soon please

Luv It <3

Yay! You updated! On Syn's birthday as well! :D This chapter was amazing, love how you explained everything. So, I'm guessing Brian is going to make Becca and Matt work everything out, at least I'm hoping. Can't wait to read more soon. <3

Poor Becca. : ( I love your writing style, it's just so beautifully written. I also love how you put a little flash back in there, it was so cute. I can't wait to read more soon. <3

Poor Becca :'c I feel so bad for her. Awesome chapter, though!! (Sorry for the short comment. I'm beat and don't have time for an actual, better comment.) <333

aww I really like your story. I started reading it a few days ago and now I'm addicted. I just hope that things get better between Matt and Bec. Anyway, I loved the chapter! :D

So, I just realised I'm supposed to be getting ready for class (I was too busy reading so I lost track of time!) but I had to read and comment on this first. XD

Not much to say, except that this was a good chapter. =) I feel so bad for her, but I guess the drama has to come from somewhere...

Anyway, gotta run! D=

xoxo
HJ.

I loved the update. =)
And no freaking way you are going to that concert!! I'll be in Atlantic city on vacation, I get there the last day of the concert so my boyfriend is going but I can't afford the ticket and the trip. You'll love avenged they are super good in concert. They won't play very many if any old songs because they don't have the rev, but they are still worth it. =))

First I loved the chapter, and thought I'm sad for no updates in a weeks :(, I hope you have a blast on Metallica's Orion Festival.

When you get back, photos would be cool. ^^

So, I like this one, too. XD I laughed at a lot of things, and I really like all the personalities in this. And wow, she's got some courage! Usually it's the guy who makes the first move in most of the stories I read, so it was nice to see a little girl power for once.

I can't wait to see what's to come! Like, is Brian seriously going to kill Matt!? D= 'Cause that would be...pretty damn awkward.

xoxo
HJ.

Yay! You updated, this chapter was amazing! Poor Becca. : ( Hope you can update soon. <3

Oh dear god, I just got trapped into another story!
Sorry I lost my tongue and I can't even think of a word for your story, more than amazing. although it's small for it lol. An update soon would be great! :D

dum dum dum...great updeat!!!

Poor Becca. I feel so bad for her. After kissing Matt and letting her feelings for him known, she's confused and scared everything's ruined. That's one hell of a tricky situation, especially with a protective older brother who doesn't want her dating at all, let alone dating his best friend. He'll have to pick up on the fact that she's down. I wonder what he'll do about that now.

This was perfect. You worry wart :P

I really like this and looking forward to reading more.

I hope you can update soon. (: If you not, it's okay. Just had to try. :P

Wow that was awesome! So full of emotion and pent up everything! Gah. I hope you update soon! Don't leave us hanging there. I mean I get that Brian will be really pissed about them kissing and stuff, but like... he went out with her best friend sooooo he can't get too mad. xD

This is great!
Update por favor! :D

What an epic ending! Yay! So happy they finally kissed! <3 Can't wait for more! :)