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  • Teenage Memories

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    I read this in about thirty minutes and I thought that it was cute, but there wasn't a lot to it. I feel like you should've taken more time to show us their love instead of telling us about it. Also it all happened pretty quickly. But all in all I enjoyed it.
    November 24th, 2012 at 09:10am
  • polka dot perfection

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    I read through this quickly but I liked it:D
    Sequel should be about a kid they adopt^.^
    November 23rd, 2012 at 05:44pm
  • Snow Horror

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    MUST BE A SEQUEL! THERE HAS TO BE!!!!
    August 17th, 2012 at 12:20pm
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    Yep there should most definitely be a sepual. I loved this and I'm so happy that they got to b together. Tho... not sure how the birth givers are going to feel about the window... sucks to b them
    July 24th, 2012 at 11:53am
  • LiveInColor

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    Sequel sequel sequel I absolutely love this!!!
    July 24th, 2012 at 06:42am
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    *Throws a comment your way* I really, really, REALLY don't like Cameron's household monster's/birth giviers. They make me wanna punch a rabid bear in the throat. And I love bears... And I'm not even sure if bears get rabid. :/. Now I have to look it up.
    June 30th, 2012 at 08:27am
  • LittleNemo!!!!!!

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    Are you ever going to update again???
    May 24th, 2012 at 07:30pm
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    I know what u mean. I the while crash really irritates me. But I'm glad ur posting again
    April 28th, 2012 at 11:17pm
  • wingslax96

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    Just read everything up to this point and OMG, I love it. Can't wait to read more :D
    April 26th, 2012 at 01:05am
  • dawn of light

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    Awwww cam :3
    April 26th, 2012 at 12:17am
  • dawn of light

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    AHHH (: I loved it :D
    April 24th, 2012 at 04:42am
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    I feel like we got further than this. But I still love the chapter
    April 16th, 2012 at 02:25am
  • thePROCRASTINATOR

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    I just read all you have so far when I reached the end I screamed, "AHHHH! I NEED MORE STORY!" So, incase the point didn't get accross UPDATE!

    *subscribes*
    April 3rd, 2012 at 06:47pm
  • dawn of light

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    I just read this story for 30 minutes and I need more, like seriously (: also, you got yourself a new subscriber :D
    April 3rd, 2012 at 11:17am
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    Yay. Ssoo sweett
    March 25th, 2012 at 10:29am
  • samitize

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    Aweee:) that is adorable! It's time like these that make me wish I had a boyfriend<3
    March 19th, 2012 at 08:53pm
  • the bells jon

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    D'awww. They finally admitted that they like each other. :3
    March 18th, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    I luv that song.... Anywho c more than one person is n luv wit ur story
    March 18th, 2012 at 07:15pm
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    -does shifty eyes like a Ninja and jumps from roof top to roof top- I see! I see a good story, and yers I have been reading it! -puts binoculars up to my face to spy on it more-
    March 18th, 2012 at 04:17am
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    Yay! TALK! TALK! TALK! TALK! TALK!
    March 18th, 2012 at 01:22am