Pesky Little Words - Comments

LIKE SIRIUS

AND JAMES IS SO CUTE AND

LILY I LOVE HER

AND everything is so so accurate and true to the book it's absolutely spectacular!

One little thing I caught in this chapter is that the spell to illuminate the tip of a wand is Lumos, not Luminos, but whatever hey there's so many spells and it certainly sounded realistic

OKAY I FEEL BAD FOR THAT LIKE DON'T TAKE IT PERSONALLY BECAUSE THIS IS INCREDIBLE

OKAY WOW

IH YMG FOSD OH MY GOD I JUST READ THIS AND MY HEART IS ALREADY IN LOVE DID THEY MAKE SINCE IDK BUT I GUESS I MEANT TO SAY THIS STORY HAS MY HEART FOREVER I LOVE IT SO MUCH

Interpretive smiley faces on how I felt for this chapter.

WHAT. WHAT IS THIS. HOLY CRAP.

THIS IS WONDERFUL. I LOVE THOSE. LILY EVANS CAN WE NOT? SIRIUS CAN WE NOT BE SO GOOD LOOKING?

my heart.

WOAH WOAH WHUT DID YOU UPDATE A MARAUDER FIC WHAT
(also fyi the divider isn't working and I honestly don't know why but yeah)

I feel kind of like I already read this one and it's new and I'm like one paragraph in and I don't understand?

Lawl Sirius. (LAWL Remus.)

OMFG EARMUFFS ASHGFJAHA ADORABLE JFGSAKJ

GRAMPAA WTF
WTF
GO SIT IN THE CORNER AND THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU'VE DONE

I'M SERIOUS TURN OFF THE COMPUTER AND SIT IN THE CORNER

(I mean I knew he wasn't going to date her in fifth year BUT DID YOU REALLY)
And on that note, you said something about Lily not thinking she'd be dating whatshisface by fifth year and then called James a sixth year and I don't know which year they're in 'cause it's been ages and I'm too lazy to check
So yeah
Fix that

Oh deer lawd are we going to see some cute Remus stuff rn? (IF YOU MUCK THIS ONE UP TOO I SWEAR TO GOD GRAMPAA I ALREADY HAVE TLAT FOR THE FEELS AND THE TEARS)

I WILL KILL YOU OH MY GOD

otay this is a train wreck of a comment and I need to go cry over all the possible romances you killed in this chapter so yeah bye (YOU SUCK)

hahahaha...who the hell is Mary McDonald?I love this...you have The Marauders down to a T!

YES TO EVERYTHING. YES TO ALL. YES TO YOUR PHENOMENAL WRITING AND TO EVERYTHING. Update this now. I love you.

I love you so much for writing a Marauders story. They're my fave!

I LOVE THIS STORY.

I really thought you were saying Sirius was gay, and that he was coming out of the closet, but it didn't happen like that and that was good. You got me.

AND MARY MCDONALD, I don't know what you're leading up to but I like it.

This is perfect in a million and one ways.

I love how Lily said "fine"
Update soon!

Love it! Keep it coming.

...I've already read all this, yeah?

AND NO YOU DO NOT GET A COMMENT ON ANYTHING BECAUSE ALL YOU'VE DONE FOR MY TUMBLR STORIES WAS LIKE AND MAYBE MESSENGER FLAILS.
/at least you got a gif reply hmph

And also I haven't been on Meebz in ages and the commenting thing feels almost weird, y'know? Oh shut up, you know.

...Okay so to make this not spam I'll say that it sounded like James wasn't wearing pants (in the first version, at least, I didn't do much more than skim this ) and Sirius is being an inconsiderate prat. Yeah.

Now go forth and write. Jebus. You don't even go to school full time.
/no siriusly throw yourself into your Jily story to make up for the loss of the Companion and the stony silence from tlat

Soo this is a Jily story (according to you loverly tumblr)? Or a Sirius/OC? I'm intrigued. You're a wonderful writer by the way. Update soon!

I like it.... yup

So I haven't commented on this then, huh?
[/ignoring the one from TWO BLOODY DECADES AGO BECAUSE YOU WOULDN'T POST HERE and the one ff, of course]

...I don't know what to say. I mean I've obviously said stuff, 'cause there was that whole other comment thingy, you noes, but I remember holding a lot of insanity back then, so...

or the fact that he turned into a goddamn twat whenever she so much as looked at him
I REALLY REALLY HOPE I POINTED THIS OUT IN MY OTHER COMMENT BECAUSE THIS IS PERF.

...Yes I said perf and no it does not matter that I'm slowly turning into some sort of ~hipster~ (as you aptly called me, you genius you) because I am Iggy and if you bug me aboot talking like this I'll just mention capes and juice boxes and the beach and we can bask in how awesome we were even 2 or 3 years ago.

How aboot we pretend that I did rant and instead said GRAMPAA POST MOAR BECAUSE THIS IS GR8 AND I WANT TO KNOW ABOOT ALL THE SUB-PLOTS AND READ ALL THE JILY AND JUST DIE OF HAPPINESS.

Siriusly though. Chop chop with the posting. I need more Jily in my life.

CANNOT WAIT! XD

You noes, Grampaa, if you could take the plunge on ff.net, you should be able to do it here. Just bs a summary until one comes to you. BE LIKE IGGY. JEEZ.


In other words 'GRAMPAA WILL YOU JUST POST THIS ALREADY.' Because you really should really should. Or else a drunk Prongs will stalk you for the rest of your life. Not even a drunk Potter, a drunk Prongs.
Try explaining a drunk deer following you around at school. JUST TRY.

...Post already. NAO.