6 Months - Comments

I'm not much of a one-shot reader, but clearly I'm desperate to read something else of yours now. XD
I'm so sad, though, where did the prequel to this disappear to? I totally would've read it. :(
But this was greatly written, as I expected it would be. :D Great job with it.
I am so wondering what the other story was like now though. Aww... I feel like it probably compared to Endless Possibilities... :(
If you still have it saved somewhere, could you possibly send it my way? Is that a lot to ask? XD
Because I would really love to read it. Truly.
I will just stop bugging you now. But I think I may read the other one-shot I saw and then I'll be done. XD

Well, Alex and Lyric most certainly have one of the most desirable relationships ever! The six months of separation is clearly a huge issue for the pair of them and I can tell because of your writing style! The want, lust and need in the way you narrate is really fantastic... Well done! xx

OMFGGG. This made my day. I absolutely adored Melody Maker, and this is just pure perfection. It's so cute and just, perfect. Thanks for writing this. Love it.

OHMYGOD I LOVE THIS AND I LOVED MELODY MAKER BECAUSE IT WAS MY FAVORITE STORY EVER AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING A MINI SEQUEL BECAUSE MELODY MAKER WAS MY FAVORITE STORY EVER AND THE SEQUEL JUST MADE IT ALL EVEN BETTER AND...did I mention how much I love this? Hahahaha really though, this was perfect in every way :)

Okay, wow... this is just so :DDD I smiled a lot during this because it's so cute and their interaction with each other is perfect. The way they talk to each other, really shows how strong their relationship really is. It's like I don't know what goes on in your actual story but I can get a gist of thei relationship and how things are with them. Well, I love Hey Monday and most specifically this song, so I'm so glad that you wrote a one-shot inspired by it. :D You really captured the emotion of someone's longing for their significant lover, examples are Lyric's impatience in the beginning; then Alex's horny little self, overexcited and all.

"Cute?" he scoffs. "I look fucking sexy."

Best line ever. Just sayin'