This is excellent. Bar for a few overlooked grammar/spelling errors (but I'm a hardass, so ignore me), I really enjoyed this. You can see your writing come to life once you get into the story - there were times when I felt like I was really looking at a scene unfold. I can't wait to see what happens with Emily and (ahem) baby? :D Update.
September 26th, 2012 at 01:46pm