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  • MoMo_92

    MoMo_92 (100)

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    I like this story keep writing this story, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    September 2nd, 2012 at 10:12pm
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    Duuude keep going !
    I love this so far !
    June 28th, 2012 at 08:07am
  • so unintelligent;

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    I love this story, and I would LOVE if you would continue.
    Though I was confused often with the amount of scene changes..
    June 28th, 2012 at 02:50am
  • dirt whispered.

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    Not a big fan of student/teacher hookups. That aside, I think this is very well written. You have interesting characters. I especially like Trent. :)
    The only suggestion I have is that you find some good transitions. I felt as if this jumped from one place/one topic to another without much warning. Otherwise it's off to a good start.
    June 7th, 2012 at 01:11am
  • Xpull.the.triggerX

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    How does this not have any comments??!!!?!
    Ughh, I love this so far. Pleaseeee update soon? :)
    May 24th, 2012 at 12:53am
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