Age Is Just a Number - Comments

  • humanik

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    C'mon boss... Please finish this or the prequel soon?
    May 3rd, 2013 at 04:30am
  • Aleakmosspool

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    I loved it! You have such amazing writing skills. I was utterly blown away.
    I totally think Jess and Beck make the greatest couple. <3
    Thank you for all your hard work. Keep writing! You have such amazing talent!
    November 15th, 2012 at 04:25am
  • deedee03

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    all i have 2 say is omg!! i just spent hours reading life as a teenage werewolf then i started reading the sequel which has bought me here. i dont no where 2 start. first off i love beck and jess as a couple. second i think ur a really talented writer! keep up the good work! and now im off 2 read more off ur other stories
    August 5th, 2012 at 02:22am
  • Blessedelua

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    XD special thanks to me!!!! yay!!!!
    lol fantastic chapter love, couldn't have imagined it going better!
    July 7th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • Blessedelua

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    awwwwwwww super cute ending!!!!!!! now to think of what happens next......
    May 8th, 2012 at 09:01am
  • Blessedelua

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    Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the chapter and the perfect ending!!!!!
    Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
    April 27th, 2012 at 03:47am
  • iron and graphite;

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    First, I want to say that the layout was beautiful. The collaboration of the banner, background, colors, and everything else was very good. The banner went very well with the story, I think it set a great mood for it. It's always great for a story when that is one of the factors, it's very eye-catching, attention grabbing technique.Also, I loved the way you separated all of the paragraphs, with the break-thing. I'm not sure what it is called, but I love it.

    Now, for the story. I was pretty much blown away by the writing, too. It was good for a one-shot, and better than what I normally read on Mibba. The detail is so deep, almost impeccable, just flawless. And I have to say, usually I'm kind of close minded with story content. Normally, I enjoy a story having more of what a character is feeling, rather than so much dialogue. That being because people who do that can't do it well, or just have a hard time with it. But this was pretty good. Although it had a lot of dialogue, it was still great.

    Overall, I was pretty impressed with this. I can honestly say I was glad I read it. I enjoyed it, and if there was to ever be more, I would read it in a heartbeat. This is super good. Great Job!

    Layout: 10/10
    Writing: 10/10
    Overall : 10/10

    Keep writing, you have a great talent!
    April 20th, 2012 at 12:26am
  • Ice_Cat

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    SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO didn't see that one coming!!!!! Wow!
    March 19th, 2012 at 06:15pm
  • alprmax

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    That was great!!!!!
    March 9th, 2012 at 09:12pm
  • Pie!

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    I always thought Jess and Beck would be a good couple. :)
    March 7th, 2012 at 02:25am
  • Blessedelua

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    Jeck love forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies of utter happiness*
    March 7th, 2012 at 02:17am
  • Jessii Tara;

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    Cute. Clayton's reaction was funny!
    March 7th, 2012 at 01:39am