I loved it! You have such amazing writing skills. I was utterly blown away. I totally think Jess and Beck make the greatest couple. <3 Thank you for all your hard work. Keep writing! You have such amazing talent!
all i have 2 say is omg!! i just spent hours reading life as a teenage werewolf then i started reading the sequel which has bought me here. i dont no where 2 start. first off i love beck and jess as a couple. second i think ur a really talented writer! keep up the good work! and now im off 2 read more off ur other stories
First, I want to say that the layout was beautiful. The collaboration of the banner, background, colors, and everything else was very good. The banner went very well with the story, I think it set a great mood for it. It's always great for a story when that is one of the factors, it's very eye-catching, attention grabbing technique.Also, I loved the way you separated all of the paragraphs, with the break-thing. I'm not sure what it is called, but I love it.
Now, for the story. I was pretty much blown away by the writing, too. It was good for a one-shot, and better than what I normally read on Mibba. The detail is so deep, almost impeccable, just flawless. And I have to say, usually I'm kind of close minded with story content. Normally, I enjoy a story having more of what a character is feeling, rather than so much dialogue. That being because people who do that can't do it well, or just have a hard time with it. But this was pretty good. Although it had a lot of dialogue, it was still great.
Overall, I was pretty impressed with this. I can honestly say I was glad I read it. I enjoyed it, and if there was to ever be more, I would read it in a heartbeat. This is super good. Great Job!