Sands of the Hourglass - Comments

Very beautiful descriptions, but very little of it seems to coincide with your claims that she's lived in the desert for a significant portion of her life, or that she's an assassin. Shouldn't her skin be rougher and more deeply tanned, and her eyes crueler?

I just stumbled across one of your stories and looking through all of them, this one caught my eye. I like the premise and the beginning of this one. I would love to read more to get a better sense of where this one is going and the characters.

I just have one problem and that is with the layout. While it is nice and beautiful to look at, the green text is slightly hard to read especially at the right corner of night sky picture.

Why does this not have comments? Why? O_O

I like your style of writing. Its very descriptive and unique.

I think I will like this story. x)

P.S. I figured since you're such a lovely commenter, I should probably get to reading something of yours. x3