No Regrets. - Comments

  • LoveForGiraffes

    LoveForGiraffes (100)

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    I really enjoyed reading this. I like how you made Ryan and Jake's personalities different and stayed away from the 'so much in common' cliche that a lot of stories have. Also, I like that you made Jake hesitant and unsure, but he went along anyway- nice character trait. Bonus points for having a lovely layout and a character section too, I always love to see that in a story. Good job =]
    March 31st, 2012 at 08:02pm
  • ohWeSaySummer

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    Aww, this was actually really cute! I already adore the two boys and wish there was more! While the emotion isn’t flat out there (which I like), you can still tell what it is and it helps that you show how they need to get away and have a night to themselves.
    March 31st, 2012 at 01:13am