Insanity Left Us Behind - Comments

I was brought here from comment swap, lol, but it looks like this story is pretty much dead unfortunately, but if you still wanted feedback: I like this story a lot! Your detailing is fantastic, and I love the way you've utilized syntax, especially in the form of shorter paragraphs/sentences following longer ones, it really gives a great emphasis and sets a great, more serious feel to your story. Honestly, I don't normally read anything related to A7X but I managed to enjoy this regardless. I love stories that deal with darker imagery and darker themes such as this one, though, and it seemed to fit in seamlessly with the characters. I also love the way that each chapter seems to lead into the next, it makes the whole thing really suspenseful and keeps the story rolling in a way that's really impressively done. Overall- bravo!

I like this story a lot! You've put so much detail into it and the prologue, I feel, and I always love Zacky stories.
I feel like you put such an exceptional amount of effort into every line and it's always great to see that in fan fics.
I can really empathise with Zacky's character as well. And of course Jimmy would be the super friend, of course. c:
Also, I might add that I don't often like stories like this but this has the kind of "I need to read more" feel to it. I can't wait to see where you take this!!!

Ooh! First to comment in like a month.
I gotta say I usually don't like stories like this for some reason, but I'm starting to love this one. You really are a talented writer. The amount of detail you put into this story makes it so interesting. Can't wait to see what happens between Brian and Zacky! Update soon please!
And btw share some of your writing ability with me, will you? You can spare some.

I don't want to sound psychopathic and weird, but I love this and I think it will be a really good story ... I love it :D :D :D :D :D

I don't think you have any idea of how amazing you are :')
This has so much detail, every single sentence combined perfectly... gah, you ARE an amazing, amazing writer. I hope you realize that some day (:
I absolutely looove this. It's amazing how Synyster is in conflict with himself because his plan of killing faltered when it came to Zacky even though he still sees himself as an amazing murderer with no heart whatsoever. I'm quite intrigued and I’m dying for more :3
I really hope you update soon ª.ª

I love this story. I love the detail and everything it's so good I dont know hwy I didn't read this before but I can't wait for more

I am just so glad you're continuing this! It's amazing!!
As long as there IS more. Lots and lots of it. This story is so damn fascinating! Truly brilliant. I can't wait to find out what happens if/when they meet again.
If i was Zack i'd be wanting to find out every little thing about Brian or i should say Synyster as i don't think he's much the person Brian was anymore/at the moment. Im very very intrigued...... That doesn't happen often. ;) Great job!

I like how you've put forward the characters and their personalities/identities. You really have set the scene in each of the chapters you've posted, making it seem as if I was a fly on the wall. I really enjoyed the dramatic opening, like Syngeance pointed out. Keep up the good work!

OH God, I love this story way too much :3 You really are an amazing writer. This is so well written and I love the way you transmit your characters' feelings... it seems real *^-^*
Now.. Where is Syn? :o I really thought he would take Zacky and now said boy is in a hospital(?) ? Okay I'm really surprised (and I confess I love when writers surprise me :D)
More? ={ Please? :3

wow. this story is really amazing and it's written prettt good too! i like how you describe things and scenes. they're so vivid. this is beautiful. :) oh and glad he's alive and awake now :3

I'm surprised this story has so few comments :3 This is amaziiiiing! *^-^*
Really, I love your writing and this story really got me hooked (maybe cuz I'm a bit of a blood freak xD)
Update soon, yeah? I have great feelings about this one *.*

Ooo I rather like the starting of this! Please continue!

I love the dramatic introduction! I'll definitely be waiting patiently (I hope) for an update. Well written and captivating, and I love that.

Yay an update!
NYUOUOUOOUOUOUOUOUOUOU JIMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-sobs- Their love was so beautiful!!!!!! WHYYY!?!??!?!?
Overall a good dramatic intro

Yay comment virginity taken!
Oh~ Me likey. Syn's all badass murderer and I'm guessing Zacky's the future victim?
Or it's just some twisted game where Zacky broke Syn's heart and Syn's killing people who look like Zacky...... or Syn's a preferential murderer..
But I'm countin on seeing some Synacky later on!!!