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  • RebeccaT

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    Aww I love the ending
    August 8th, 2012 at 11:38pm
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    This is amazing so far :3 I can't wait for the next update you do. Mr. Green Cool
    August 8th, 2012 at 05:47pm
  • fearless-forever

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    Hmm all I can say is that if Finn tries rto make a move on Ver, the gloves are coming off...
    August 7th, 2012 at 07:39pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    loved it!
    August 7th, 2012 at 09:27am
  • M.o.n.s.t.e.r.

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    Hooked!! I love this story it is a one of a kind!(:
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:57am
  • fearless-forever

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    Hmmmm I wonder if Finn will try to steal Ver away?
    July 29th, 2012 at 03:23am
  • whoathere

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    Yay! Finn the warlock! I sense drama coming upppp. I love Laurence, lol. I found his almost-jealously kinda funny.
    July 26th, 2012 at 06:06am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    OMG LOVE!!!!
    July 26th, 2012 at 04:56am
  • whoathere

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    Another chapter pleaaaase?
    This was great :D
    Finn seems sweet but random. Is he supernatural too? At first I thought he was James..
    July 20th, 2012 at 12:21am
  • fearless-forever

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    Hmmmm Finn seems nice, but I think there's something off about him... Or maybe it's just me. :D
    July 14th, 2012 at 06:04pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    What the monkey face chicken feather!!!!!!!
    July 14th, 2012 at 08:29am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    I HAVE HAVE HAVE HAVE TO HAVE ANOTHER CHAPTER I'M DYING... it's like one in the morning and I can't laugh our make ANY noise... do you know how hard that is with a story this amazing? subscribed and waiting!
    June 25th, 2012 at 09:54am
  • whoathere

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    I think James will be back and that I hate him..lol
    Missy is great. I like her spunk, haha.
    I love Ver and Laurence. They're cute.
    Update soon :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 07:14am
  • fearless-forever

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    I don't think this will be the last they see of James... :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 04:52am
  • RebeccaT

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    I love this story so much lol and I like missy lol
    June 24th, 2012 at 04:20am
  • All About Lovin' You

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    Comment swap bought me here, and I am SO glad!!! Your story has drawn me in and I'm stuck to it like that spide web that was stuck to me this morning (lol!! sorry, bad joke).

    To be completely serious now, when I first started reading this, I was like "errr, this is kind of boring". I am sorry for judging based on the first chapter because you proved me wrong! Once things started to progress with Ver and Mr Reed, I started to dig it. THEN when all the supernatural kind stuff came in, I couldn't stop reading. Seriously, job well doing at coming up with this plot. Really wasn't what I was expecting. Love it, and can't wait for more!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 12:22pm
  • Checkmate Joy

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    I don't know where I's be without this story. You never find good Teacher+Student relationship stories, but this ones tops. LOVE.
    June 21st, 2012 at 06:35pm
  • Shawna Sikora

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    I'm only on chapter four, and I'm hooked! It's rare I find a decent story to read! :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • fearless-forever

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    I'm thinking (hoping) that M. Reed found them... :D
    June 18th, 2012 at 07:26pm
  • whoathere

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    I hope you start updating more frequently! Mr. Reed should be the once to find them and he should beat James up! :)
    June 18th, 2012 at 07:14am
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